My masterpiece for UC, friend commented "it's godly", anyone willing to read?

College Essays
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<p>Help me out here people.</p>

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<p>pm it to me and ill check it out</p>

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<p>Not applying anywhere near UC, I’d love to read this please. PM it over if you would</p>

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<p>Pm it over! I’m not applying to any schools on the west coast.</p>

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<p>PM me. I’m not applying to any UC’s or California schools.</p>

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<p>I’ll read :slight_smile:
PM it over!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and give you a critique. And no, I’m no applying to UC.</p>

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<p>i’ll read, send over</p>

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<p>Me too! Send please.</p>

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<p>I hope you guys are telling the truth, but thanks for your help.
Anyone else?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.
But if it is “godly,” what critique could there possibly be?</p>

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<p>Yeah I’ll see what I can do to help. Pm it over to me</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>Um, it’s not that I don’t trust people, but I really need more “nonpeer”.
Prefer anyone has a joint date earlier than 2009…</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, but I am applying to UC (who doesn’t instate?).</p>

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<p>Bump…anyone?</p>

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<p>Sure, but why need more feedback if it’s so “godly?”
Anyway, I’ll be more than happy to :]</p>

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<p>^ true, I was thinking the same thing
PM me - let’s see what’s so “godly” about it >:3</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to critique your essay. What schools are you applying to, I’m assuming UBC, UCLA, and UCSD? Shoot me an e-mail at <a href=“mailto:NKunkel@ucsd.edu”>NKunkel@ucsd.edu</a> or pm me and we’ll talk.</p>