my masterpiece, need readers/editors

College Essays
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<p>this is the second draft of my common app essay, topic 6(other). its 763 words and needs some editing. its going to be going to top notch schools (harvard, princeton, duke, etc.) so please, scrutinize as much as possible. ive basically got my ideas down, but now need to take a chisel to it, and that where you guys come in</p>

<p>please let me know if youre willing to edit it for me. (prefer those who are not applying this year)</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll read if you want</p>

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<p>I’ll read - PM me</p>

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<p>PM me. I’m a senior, applying to top schools but no Ivies (look at my post history).</p>

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<p>if you need another set of eyes, i can help. james</p>

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<p>hey pm me i would like to help you out</p>

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<p>fine</p>

<p>do you want mine??</p>

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<p>id love to read good pieces of work. send it across :slight_smile: x</p>