My new common application essay

Applying to College
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<p>After reading comments from my original essay thread (<a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=101884%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=101884&lt;/a&gt;)&lt;/p>

<p>I've decided to edit around my essay to make it more personal. Now will anyone read my new essay?</p>

<p>Thanks. Please reply here or PM me</p>

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<p>i'll read it :)</p>

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<p>i'd be glad to, pm me.</p>

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<p>ill help you</p>

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<p>I've PM'ed you for. Now, comments? :)</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>hey, i read your essay. looks pretty solid to me. i spotted one grammatical error tho, you wrote "refer" instead of "referred"</p>

<p>i liked ur topic too :)</p>

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<p>PMed. Thanks guys, I'm getting some helpful comments</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>i'll comment</p>

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<p>me tooooooooooooooooooooooo</p>

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<p>count me in as well</p>

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<p>sure pm me</p>

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<p>I'm in, pm me</p>

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<p>i'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>bring it on!</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>PMed everybody. Thanks</p>

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<p>I will read it... pm me</p>

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<p>hit me with the essay too</p>