<p>It's really abstract, but I think its unique in its subject and revealing of my personality. It's going out to Stanford before Nov. 1st so would anyone like to read it? It's almost done...I've been working on it for a couple months now! :D</p>
<p>sure, I'd be glad to read it. I'm just about done with my own essays.
About the abstract part... make sure to show, not tell, with examples. But then again, i should probably wait till I read it.</p>
<p>whoa u guys work on it for a couple months?</p>
<p>I finished my personal commonapp essay in 1 day.... maybe i messed up.. :|</p>
<p>oh and a question:
can u do more than 1 personal essay & send it to the colleges? Or more than 1 extracurricular essay and send it?</p>
<p>Send it over, I'll help you out.</p>
<p>Sure, sounds awesome.</p>
<p>I'll critique it for you. Just PM me.</p>
<p>A couple months?? WOW
Hah I did one day of writing and one day of editing..
but anyways, I'd love to read it..sounds interesting. pm it if you want</p>
<p>I'd love to read it, send it over.</p>
<p>I wonder what it is about haha, PM the essay to me, i'll critique it for ya.</p>
<p>haha it's about insects....unique right? everyone that's read it has said it's got great content. it just lacks a few stylistic elements...effective transitions, flow between a few sentences, etc. </p>
<p>I'll PM you guys tomorrow, and perhaps you guys could help me out? Thanks! :D</p>
<p>hey, I'd love to critique for you, please send to me!</p>
<p>oh my... i wrote about insects too, haha small world :)</p>
<p>I'd love to read it. Send it over and I'm going to read it.</p>
<p>I'd evaluate it with my honest opinion.</p>
<p>i'd love to read it</p>
<p>i'll read it, if you still need some advice :)</p>