My personal statement

College Essays
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<p>I've been dealing with my Personal Statement, and I'm quite stuck now. Somebody reads it and gives me advice?</p>

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<p>I’ve made some changes, still need someone to critic, anyone?</p>

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<p>Upppppp…Still, sbd helps me? Please?</p>

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<p>I think my idea is quite good, but I have trouble with the approach. Anybody willing to read? :(</p>

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<p>Sure, PM it over.</p>

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<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>=] i think i can</p>

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<p>PM-ed kikocupcake, still need someone to read mine :D. I really appreciate all your help! Thanks kikocupcake, thanks Mentos!!!</p>

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<p>bumppp~~~~~~~~~~~~
Anybody else???
I’m nearly done with my Personal Statement, and really need you guys to help me.</p>

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<p>Hi, i’m done with my personal statement, anybody willing to read before I submit it?</p>

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<p>Hi, anybody willing to read a polished essay? Any suggestion will be really appreciated!</p>

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<p>I will read it. PM me!</p>

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<p>Thanks yummycheese55!!!
I’ve made some changes! Anybody willing to read again? :D</p>

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<p>up, I’ve finished my essay, anyone mind reading for some last minute before I can submit it?</p>

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<p>up~ I hope my personal statement is not that bad, so I still hope you guys can help me.</p>

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<p>Up. Somebody willing to read? Please.</p>

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<p>Ok, PM it over. But I am not good at grammar…</p>