My Rice supplement- somewhat urgent

College Essays
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<p>I really need someone to take a look at this essay and tell me if it gives them a good impression and, if not, what it is lacking. Thanks!</p>

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<p>sure ill take a look at it</p>

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<p>I will look</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it
Just PM me
Thanks
What did you put in your Rice Box?
I’m going to make a collage</p>