<p>It's a little too long and rambly as of now (1270 words OMG)...
I'd really appreciate any advice on how to make it shorter (to about 900 words).
Thanks.</p>
<p>Cut all the unness. words. If a sentance makes sense without a word and it does not have meaning, cut it out. If a paragraph or sentance is not pertaining to your theme, than cut it out.</p>
<p>Hope that helps; I’m not even half way done with mine.</p>
<p>^ Thanks for the advice. </p>
<p>Was kind of hoping someone would be willing to read my essay. I guess my first post wasn’t very clear.</p>