My Stanford Roommate Essay - feedback

<p>Hey,</p>

<p>I was hoping that some people could read my Stanford roommate essay and give me some feedback.</p>

<p>No '14ers please!</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>Sure but…</p>

<p>I’m a '14, not applying to Stanford though…it’s up to you.</p>

<p>i’m also a '14, but i live on the East coast and applying only on my side of the us so ill read it.</p>