My Strange Supplement Essay; Critique

<p>Well, it was an answer to this quote:</p>

<p>’‘The world as revealed by science is far more beautiful, and far more interesting,
than we had any right to expect. Science is valuable because of the view of the
universe that it gives.’’ </p>

<p>I made an interesting juxtoposition between science and singing; would anyone care to critique? I think it’s mildy amusing. :)</p>

<p>Send it over hurrr!</p>

<p>I sent it, and I thank you, miss_mur3r. :D</p>

<p>Read it. Replied.</p>

<p>It’s very good!</p>

<p>Send it over to me! I’m responding to the 5th quotation, so no worries. =]</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it. It’s the same one I responded to, and apparently they liked it.</p>

<p>Medic - you applied ED and got accepted?</p>

<p>May I take a look at your essay as well?</p>

<p>Miss-I applied for spring transfer and got accepted. I don’t have it with me–I’m on vacation. Sorry. PM me after the 2nd and I’ll get it to you.</p>

<p>Haha. Nevermind.
:(</p>

<p>I need to submit in a few days.</p>

<p>Oh the science one - I tried that one but it didn’t work out. Pm it over here and I’ll look it over for you.</p>

<p>PM it over. I’m applying RD as well but I already submitted the supplement last week.</p>

<p>Hey, many thanks to all y’all for caring; I really needed the critique. :)</p>