My SUNY essay, worried about this one!

<p>So anybody up for ripping my essay apart? :] </p>

<p>I'm nervous about this one because of the 500 word limit. My common app essay is a bit longer. I have a lot to say and could write a novel, so 500 words was tough for me. But I think I did a solid job. I want the essay to be really good though since my SAT isn't exactly amazing. </p>

<p>Applying to Oswego, New Paltz, Freedonia, Plattsburgh, and Albany, if it matters o.o</p>

<p>Hoping to finish my SUNY app and send it out in the next few days, so any takers?</p>

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

<p>SUNY Potsdam doesn’t require an essay.</p>