My supplemental essay: a little help?

College Essays
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<p>Well, my supplemental essay can only be 500 words or less, and at this point, I'm exactly at 500 words. </p>

<p>It needs some major revision though, and I'd really like to get it done quickly so I can get my apps straight and submitted by next week.</p>

<p>I really need help with the ending, as I keep running out of space in my 500 word limit, making it seem a little abrupt.</p>

<p>I'd prefer someone who has already written college essays before or an adult who is familiar with these kinds of things. </p>

<p>So, who wants to take a whack at it?</p>

<p>The Topic: </p>

<p>Conlanging: The Art of Creating Langauges</p>

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<p>Gee, guys. </p>

<p>Come on now.</p>

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<p>You can send it my way. I will let you know what I think. Be sure to tell me the prompt.</p>

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<p>Alright, thanks. =)</p>

<p>Anyone else want to share their opinion?</p>

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<p>I need more help…please…</p>

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<p>I haven’t finished the college essay process by any means, but I’ve already written several, and managed to chop my own 1000+ essay to a neat 500 more than once if that’s what you really need.</p>