<p>It sounds like I copied out of the viewbook:(</p>
<p>Maybe you can paste it in so we have some idea of what you're talking about.</p>
<p>Is this a retrospective look at the essay? :P</p>
<p>yeha i dont think mine is all that hawt either. i'll paste mine up if you guys do - i'ts not like it matters anyways...</p>
<p>So for my transfer essay i wrote it, and never looked at it again, because i didn't want to find mistakes (that i couldn't fix)...</p>
<p>my transfer essay sucked ass but I got into cal</p>
<p>lewl</p>