My trip to Africa Essay. Any takers?

College Essays
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<p>It answers my "experience" question #1 on the common app.
ANY HELP ON ANY PART OF IT WOULD BE APPRECIATED!</p>

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<p>pm it over if you’d like</p>

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<p>[Reed</a> Magazine: My Essay](<a href=“http://web.reed.edu/reed_magazine/autumn2006/features/my_essay/what_to_say.html]Reed”>http://web.reed.edu/reed_magazine/autumn2006/features/my_essay/what_to_say.html)</p>

<p>Check out what NOT to write about. Excerpt from above, with the #1 thing NOT to write about: The Trip.

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This piece is also a specific literary form, like an epic or a limerick, and has its own clich</p>

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<p>I will read it.</p>

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<p>bumpp any other takers? and digmedia, its not how it sounds. its different, but thanks :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll look it over if you so desire. =]</p>

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<p>i can! pm it over. i’m an '09er, if that’s ok with you.</p>

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<p>Where in ‘Africa’ did you go? just curious…</p>

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<p>Hey
If anyone wants to read my India essay please PM me. I’ll be very grateful!</p>

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<p>I have an Africa trip essay as well. The thing is that my family is actually from the country I visited. PM me if you would like to read it.</p>

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<p>Haha, yeah my father was born there, that’s why I went. </p>

<p>I went to kenya and tanzania!</p>

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<p>PM your essays; all the other foreign trip people( India, Africa), pm me as well. </p>

<p>Trips are becoming increasingly more difficult to write about so I will keep that in mind as I read your essays.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look… I usually go way overboard with ideas/improvements lol</p>