My Two Common App Essay's. I need Advice!

Applying to College
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<p>My two Common App Essays- Anyone wanna check them out? I would love some advice. My GC hasn't had the time to do so. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>PM Sent. Anyone Else?</p>

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<p>i might take a look</p>

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<p>ill take a look... email is better <a href="mailto:goopsta91589@yahoo.com">goopsta91589@yahoo.com</a>
but pm works fine too</p>

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<p>i'll read, pm me :)</p>

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<p>i will read too</p>

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<p>bump......</p>

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<p>i'll read them</p>

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<p>i'll read
email would be better
<a href="mailto:yangzhu0512@gmail.com">yangzhu0512@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>good luck!</p>

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<p>i will read them pm me</p>

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<p>I'll read them</p>

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<p>bump
10 characters</p>

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<p>I would be glad to read them and give you some advice. :-) </p>

<p>If you wish, send them to me at <a href="mailto:kaiwahine130@yahoo.com">kaiwahine130@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>just pm if you're still interested in another person to read your essays</p>

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<p>I'll check them out. Will anyone be willing to read mine?</p>

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<p>sure pm me adman</p>

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<p>id be happy to read both.</p>

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<p>sure i'll try to give u some feedback</p>

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<p>I just realized that I didn't even see the second essay that you sent me...I'll respond to that one when I have a chance.</p>