My two UC essays.

College Essays
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<p>So I wrote my two essays, but need feedback & edits.</p>

<p>I need to know:</p>

<li><p>Which essay is better? I’m going to use one for Common App.</p></li>
<li><p>Is my essay too unfocused? & What I can do to improve my essays.</p></li>
<li><p>Or scrap it and start over.</p></li>
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<p>I can read & edit you essays and give you some feeback. Just PM it to me. :)</p>

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<p>:) I'll give you some advice. I'm aware of what UCs/Privates look for in essays.</p>

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<p>PM it, ill see what i can do</p>

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<p>you can PM me too if you want suggestions</p>

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<p>feel free to pm me and i'll read them.</p>

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<p>I'll take a gander</p>

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<p>i'll read it too</p>

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<p>I'll read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>i'll read, pm me..</p>

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<p>i can read/comment if you're interested.</p>

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<p>pm me
pm me
pm me</p>

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<p>I'll check it out ;D</p>

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<p>i'll read it ^^</p>

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<p>Sure, I’ll read them when I get a chance if you'd like</p>

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<p>pm me, i'll give you honest feedback</p>

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<p>I'd love to read it.
People tell me I provide good and honest commentary.
Email me at: <a href="mailto:confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com">confusedcalcstudent@yahoo.com</a></p>