My UC essays! Anyone want to read them?

College Essays
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<p>Help with my UC essays.
Can someone give me some constructive criticism?That's OK to be direct.
Many thanks for your reading and advices.</p>

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<p>Sure. Just send them over</p>

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<p>I’ll read!</p>

<p>Sent from my SGH-T989 using CC</p>

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<p>Sure, send them</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me!</p>