My UC Prompt 2! 'Nice' or Brilliant? Help please?

College Essays
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<p>Ugh I need help!
I finished TWO essays. Both I think are 'okay' but not brilliant at all.
Anyone care to critique? Um PM me, or IM me please!!!</p>

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<p>ermmm if you read mine, I’ll read yours? lol I’m really desperate here people!</p>

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<p>i can try to give you some feedback</p>

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<p>i can give a try</p>

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<p>send it over ill take a look. pm me</p>

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<p>I can take a look at them.</p>

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<p>PM it over baybayyy</p>

<p>jetsley</p>

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<p>PM it over kiddo hey oh 10 characters here or there</p>