My UChicago Essay... Can an admitted student take a look?

<p>Hey all,
I've written my free choice essay for UChicago and I was wondering if anyone - preferably a student - could take a look at it? My biggest worry whether I've crossed the "Be Creative" line and gone into a "this isn't even relevant" territory. PM me please!! Thank you so much.</p>

<p>Hi, I got in last year but chose to take a gap year so I’m not there right now. I’d be happy to look at your essay though.</p>