My very personal Common App essay :)

<p>May I read it too?</p>

<p>I didn’t receive it.</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it too ! :))</p>

<p>^ PMed it to you all. :)</p>

<p>hey invisiblemonster I didn’t get it, just so you know</p>

<p>i’d be up for it too! graduated this year :slight_smile: feel free to check my history</p>

<p>I will read it. :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it :]</p>

<p>I"ll read it too. Hopefully, it is as good as your cell mate’s fledgling!</p>

<p>@titan12- Unfortunately, you only have 2 posts, so I’m hesitant to send it to you.</p>

<p>I have sent it to everyone else.</p>

<p>And for anyone in the future who wants to read it, only post on this if you actually want to give feedback. Many of the above posters never replied when I sent my essay to them.</p>

<p>Hey, I’d love to take a look at it, and offer feedback as well :)</p>

<p>This essay is so bad. All over the place. Awful use of transitions. Try going to Maryland Honors…</p>

<p>^ LOL.
Go away, Andrew. :P</p>

<p>I would love to take a look as well, if you still want new feedback :)</p>

<p>^ PMed you. :)</p>

<p>I will not be PMing it to anyone anymore. Too many people have not responded.</p>

<p>Thanks to those who gave helpful advice!</p>

<p>would love to read it</p>

<p>PM me, I’ll help.</p>

<p>Wait. you know fledglng?</p>