<p>I just finished my common app essay. I need some opinions on what i need to do to make it better, or what I should change, or if i should jsut scrap it.</p>
<p>no one who is applying this year to college. </p>
<p>Thanks , I really need your help!</p>
<p>I hope you checked up your grammar already. Capital I's and complete sentences :d.</p>
<p>I read through it and I did spell check....</p>
<p>post here if you want me to pm/email you the essay</p>
<p>help is needed</p>
<p>I was just commenting on your lack of structure in your posts. Usually people try to make their posts asking for "essay help" as clear and clean as possible.</p>
<p>Also, why bother sending it to anonymous people over the internet? Give it to yoru friends/neighbors/family/teachers to read.</p>
<p>I have shown it to my friends, and I would also like to get some opinions from other people. My parents are both pretty bad at English, while my brother is 6. </p>
<p>This is a college site, and therefore, I bet I could get some useful help on my essay.</p>
<p>I am applying this year, but I've already written my essay, and what's more, I am not the type of person to do a risky essay in the first place. If you still don't want me to read it then that's fine, but I'd be more than happy to.</p>
<p>PM me. Let's see how risky you can get.</p>
<p>Well it's a bad idea to trust anonymous people on the web who you don't know at all. Notice the kid that posted his entire essay up :D.</p>
<p>Show it to teachers, show it to neighbors. I wouldn't trust some random guy on the internet with my college application essay.</p>
<p>PM me too, I've got time to help.</p>
<p>Hey, if you don't trust us, next time, don't even bother asking. We are just trying to help. Think more positively of others.</p>
<p>Although I am applying to college this year, I would be more than happy to give my feedback if you need it.</p>
<p>-JIMMY@KILLARNEY</p>
<p>I just dont want someone stealing my essay, thats all.</p>
<p>I have nothing against anyone personally, and I have sent my essay to two ppl of the class of 07.</p>
<p>cheers</p>
<p>My essay is a work in progress, but I already have the majority of it written.</p>
<p>I'd be glad to read it and give you some good 'ole Southern feedback, if ya want.</p>
<p>i'll read it!!</p>
<p>I'll read it over...</p>
<p>PM me if you like. I can assure you that I am not a prospective high school student.</p>
<p>PM me, I just started College today. Not much HW yet, so I've got time.</p>
<p>pm me dat there essay, i look at 'er and give yeh some grammer and spelin helping.</p>
<p>haha seriously though pm me</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>i'm 08</p>
<p>PM me. I am in your class, but I already wrote mine. (I promise :-)</p>