My "Why Swat" essay

<p>Could someone, preferably a Swat student or parent of one, take a look at my essay and offer some constructive criticism or just tell me what they think of it? It would be much appreciated!</p>

<p>sure, just pm it to me</p>

<p>i'll give it a read too</p>

<p>Pm me if you need additional help</p>

<p>i'll read it for u. PM me</p>

<p>Ill read it</p>

<p>Would it be possible for any of you all to look over my Why Swat essay as well? I don't want to come off like some giant suck up and am afraid that I do. If you read it, I promise that I will bake you something when we both end up at Swat next fall.</p>

<p>pellmellen, I'm not a current student... just an applicant like yourself. But I would be happy to read it. I'm assuming you were one of those who were granted the extended deadline? Unfortunately I wasn't, so I already had to mail mine. But anyhow... PM me if you are still looking for readers.</p>