<p>The way that I wrote the "Why do you want to attend this college?" essay sounds so fake. I'm not sure how I can make it sound more like me.</p>
<p>the main point of this essay is for the admissions people to decide whether or not youre fit for the school. so maybe talk about your individual interests and how they would be perfect for the school. but dont talk about how you love the curiculum/beautiful campus/beautiful buildings because they already know that. they want to know why YOU would fit.
idk those are toughies good luck!</p>
<p>pm your essay to me if you want and i might be able to help. (and i already applied ED so dont worry about stealing lol)</p>
<p>i can help u if it is a college that i know about/ am applying to
which one is it?
u can PM me if u want</p>