My "Why UChicago Essay"

<p>I wrote my Why I want to attend the University of Chicago essay and I was wondering if there are any students out there who got accepted who wouldn't mind reading it to see if I'm on the right track. I wrote exactly how I felt and what I wanted so if anything it's very true to myself. I'm just not sure if the style is right. If anyone would like to read it I'd really appreciate it!</p>

<p>I’d love to read your essay, though I warn you that I’ve not been admitted and I am applying too, but I can offer a critique.</p>

<p>I’ll PM it to you. Thanks a lot</p>

<p>I’ll read it. :)</p>

<p>I’d love to read it and give you a critique, but like debarghya i’m applying too :)</p>

<p>i was admitted last year and almost went to Chicago. I’m pretty good with essays, so I’ll take a quick look if you want.</p>

<p>I am NOT applying and would be happy to critique :)</p>

<p>i’ll take a look. pm</p>

<p>i’d love to read it,plz pm it to me!!</p>

<p>i’m a rising 2nd year at the college</p>

<p>i can definitely look over it if you’d like.</p>

<p>I would do my best to critique on your Why Chicago but like the two people above me I too am applying…and I am uncharacteristically blunt when it comes to reviews so be warned!</p>

<p>I’ve already applied, been accepted, and enrolled, and I’d be happy to look at it.</p>

<p>I just finished my first year. If you want me to read it, I would love to.</p>

<p>I will read it. I am not sure if I’m applying or not. At this point, I haven’t researched it enough to form a decision.</p>