Need a final opinion

<p>Hi all! Like everyone else, I am a little anxious about the January 1st deadline, and I am second guessing the current Common App Essay! Could anyone possibly read and comment on both my essay and a NYU supplement as well. I've had positive feedback from college counselors, but I would to get a final, unbiased opinion. THANK YOU for reading this if you do! </p>

<p>I’ll help you if you want! I’m also a high school senior, but all my apps and decisions are in. I’ll do my best to help :)</p>