Need a honest opinion.

I have been working on some college essays for a while now. But I never seem to like them. I feel like every time I read I find something weird but when I asked a friend to read it he said it was good. Would anyone mind reading some of my essay and giving me some feed back. It would be great !

I’ll be happy to-- if you can wait until the weekend.

Right now I’m totally swamped. I don’t expect to see daylight till at least Saturday.

OK I’ll PM to you. Take your time
Thanks !