Need a mature perspective on my essay

College Essays
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<p>Thing is that due to a few personal issues, I can't have anyone I know critique my essay which is why I was hoping a parent with knowledge regarding college essays could comment on it.</p>

<p>I only want to know if the essay hits the right spots for the reader. (topic and content-wise) I can take care of the typos and grammatical errors later on.</p>

<p>Just comment on this thread or inbox me and I'll send it right over</p>

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<p>Ill look over it.</p>

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<p>I think it is maybe not a good idea to write about a topic you wouldn’t feel comfortable showing people. But I will read it and let you know --topic and content0-wise comments only are perfect for me I don’t want to work that hard!</p>

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<p>i would to read it for you.</p>

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<p>I am not a parent but I approach thing maturely. If you want, I can read it.</p>