Need a Second Opinion on my Weird Common App Essay- I'll read yours!

College Essays
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<p>I'd be really grateful if someone would read my common app essay. It's prompt number 2 about failure. I'm really stressed that people aren't gonna get it, but I'm afraid to show it to anyone I know, which is where the internet comes in. I'm applying to UChicago EA and Fordham EA, then probably Amherst, Swarthmore, Columbia, BC. I'll read yours if you read mine!</p>

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<p>Bump. I’m going crazy guys anybody?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it! Pm me.</p>

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<p>I could take a look!</p>

<p>Would you mind reading over mine as well?</p>

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<p>Thanks guys! (bump)</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to—email me :p</p>