<p>so basically I'm pretty average when it comes to apply to ivies and upper tier schools (4.1 weighted, 32 ACT, white male, middle/upper class) and I want to set myself apart. So I wrote an essay that's kinda out there for Cornell Middlebury and Dartmouth. Can someone read it and give me advice? It's REALLY not the typical college essay, most kids write something like "This happened to me, I reacted this way, and it make me better this way" and I basically told a story that doesn't really show anything about me but is (hopefully) kind of humorous and can bring (hopefully) some sort of relief for adcoms who have to read so many essays. Can someone take a look? I'll pm it, but help sooner rather than later would be nice as this is only a first draft.
THANKS</p>
<p>sorry for the horrible grammar/spelling, I typed it really fast and didn't read it(the post, not the essay)</p>
<p>I'm not applying to any Ivies, but I took a pretty big risk with my Essay as well. Really weird topic choice, so if you want me to help you can PM it over.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to take a look at it</p>