<p>Hi, I am looking for a few people who would like to help me out by reading and critiquing my admissions essay. I just typed the first draft and I know it definitely needs some work before submission. It would be greatly appreciated! =)</p>
<p>anyone want to help?</p>
<p>I can help</p>
<p>Alright awesome, I messaged it to you. Thanks =)</p>
<p>ill help you out if you need another reader</p>
<p>Okay thanks, dannyp32, I messaged it to you.
And JerryB, thanks for the advice I’ll consider it.</p>
<p>I would be happy to edit it if you would like another person to look it over.</p>
<p>Could you please help me cuz English is not really my first language and I am afraid that I am making some huge mistakes. Thanks!</p>