Need an opinion on my UC essay

<p>I need someone to read my UC essay and give me their honest opinion on it. It's very personal, and I've had a few people read it but no one has given me any real critique, so I'm looking for someone to be very honest. I need to make sure that it answers the prompt and makes sense to total strangers. Please comment if you can help so I can send it! thanks!</p>

<p>i can help.</p>

<p>PM me, i can help</p>

<p>I can help if you’d like :)</p>

<p>if you still need it, i’m here.</p>