Need Assistance with Harvard Supplement ASAP

After disappointingly being rejected from Stanford EA, I really want to make sure my Harvard app is strong in every way possible. Would anyone mind reading my essay and providing me with helpful insight to improve? I would like to submit the app by this weekend, so prompt assistance would be much appreciated.

I’d be happy to take a look. You can send me whatever you sent to Stanford if you want, use that as a jumping off point.

I can take a look. But to what extent do you need help with editing?

Feel free to PM me and I can give you my opinion about any changes that should be made

Ditto.

pm me