<p>Since I have written first drafts for a few of my essays I am looking for unbiased and credible readers to review them and blatantly shred them into pieces!</p>
<p>umm.. I might not PM those who don't seem credible (Post counts and stuff!) so I thought I should clear that out!</p>
<p>Right now I am stuck with my common app activity short answer! Anyone ready to help?</p>
<p>I’d be willing to read if for you. If you decide to PM me, let me know what you think are the things that you’re trying highlight.</p>
<p>I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>Hey, this might be random ( I am not asking to read your response) but I was just wondering was your short answer written in more of a college essay style or more like " I helped kids in … " ( i guess blunt would be better).</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
<p>I’d like to take a look as well. 
I don’t have an exceptional amount of posts, but hopefully that wouldn’t deter from your decision.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. While I’m relatively new to CC, I’m the editor in chief of my school’s newspaper and literary magazine, so I’m pretty credible when it comes to critiquing written pieces.</p>
<p>I don’t have a lot of posts, but if you read them, most are informative, and I hope you will find me credible. By the way, I will be going to college in the fall.</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I give honest, sometimes brutally honest, criticism mostly. Compliments are only given to things that really “wow” me. If you’re worried about credibility-- well I would too. But I’ve been on CC for almost 4 years if that helps much.</p>