need criticism/thoughts on SCEA essay

<p>Ahhh! I'm applying to yale SCEA, and am really down to the wire with this week's deadline. I was that hoping somebody knowledgeable and helpful (possibly already at yale) could read my supplement essay, and give me their thoughts and criticisms. If you can read it before Friday, I'll pm it to you. </p>

<p>Thanks :)</p>

<p>pm me...im a current yalie</p>

<p>Pm me, ill look at it.</p>

<p>anyone else? I'd really appreciate it :)</p>

<p>pm me and i'll take a look</p>

<p>it may take me a little while before I get to read it (school and college stuff myself), but i will read it within the next 4 hours.</p>

<p>I don't mean to piggyback on your thread, but if any readers feel like reading another essay, my SCEA essay could also use some help.</p>

<p>i'd be willing to read it</p>