Need Critique for 1st Draft

[hge876]

<p>I would appreciate it if anyone could read it and give their opinions on my topic, and the paper in general.</p>

<p>Just ask and I will PM it to you</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

[natim1]

<p>i’ll help you</p>

[Selectum]

<p>PM me</p>

[serendipityyy]

<p>i would love to read it ! PM me</p>

[hopefully_ivy]

<p>pm me! what schools do you plan on sending this to?</p>

[bjvise]

<p>Sure, pm it over</p>