Need critique on UC Essay #2

College Essays
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<p>I'm looking for personal feedback on my UC essay for prompt #2. I'm only looking to send this out to current UC students or parents. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>PM me</p>

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<p>im wlling to help and give a personal feedback asap. ill be on all night, so pm me</p>

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<p>I'll read.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>