Need Critiques on an Essay (Will read yours in exchange)

College Essays
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<p>I've sent my essay to 2-3 people for them to read it, but they haven't responded and I'm sort of skeptical about whether they will at this point. It's the "Why political science" essay and I'd like to get some response on it before I send it in to multiple schools.</p>

<p>I will offer to read over + critique your essay (on whatever topic) if you read mine. Let me know if you are interested and I will PM it to you.</p>

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<p>any takers on this, at all…?</p>

<p>darn.</p>

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<p>I will look it over, but it’s up to you (I’m applying reg. dec. January 2010 to Princeton, Harvard, Georgetown, Claremont McKenna, Stanford, George Washington U, Brown, Colgate, Amherst, Vassar, Wesleyan, and Hamilton).
Let me know, email is <a href="mailto:thompson.simonM@gmail.com">thompson.simonM@gmail.com</a></p>