Need critiques!

<p>I wrote my COrnell supp essay #1 and need feedback...please PM plz</p>

<p>hey parikhs, did you ever get into NYU...
I remember reading that you hadn't received you decision yet... but that was a while ago. How did everything turn out?</p>

<p>I didn't get in...where did you apply ED? Would you mind taking a look at my essay?</p>

<p>All regular decision for me...
I'd like to read the essay but I don't have the time...
Finishing off my resumes so that I can get them to the post office by 12:00pm</p>

<p>Okay, np...I still have to finish my common app essay, cornell supp #2, and resume. The resume doesn't have to be postmarked by deadline does it? I can send it out on Monday?</p>

<p>Also...are you making a real Resume or a "brag sheet"? Like are you doing it in resume format?</p>

<p>Resume format...
I am making a full blown resume, not just a brag sheet</p>

<p>I guess I'll go with that too...what are you going to list? How are you going to organize activities? is it okay if I organize it by "Career-Oriented", "Community Service", "Jobs/Internship", and "Interests"?</p>

<p>Ahhhhh Yes...
Resumes are finished and postmarked</p>