Need critiquing/reviewing on FINAL UC personal statement prompts!

<p>If anyone willing to give the time and is credible, I would like for them to look through my essays and give me any last minute changes I can use on them! Thanks =]</p>

<p>Goal Schools (if it helps at all):
UCB
UCLA
UCSD
UCD
UCI
UCR</p>

<p>Id be happy to take a look</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. You might have to send two messages since it’ll go over the word count limit.</p>

<p>Sure I would love to</p>