Need critques and corrections an an essay

[opandroid]

<p>Any help would be wonderful i need this in by today...</p>

[clienk]

<p>Sure.
Good luck with your deadline, I’ll edit ASAP.</p>

[MrSub60]

<p>PM me, I’ll try to edit quickly.</p>

[bilalbaig94]

<p>Yeah sure I’ll do it</p>