<p>Hi guys, I'm a sophomore applying someplace ;). I need a lot of help on my essays. What my issue is is that I've got a decent hook and intro, but I'm not fully answering the question. I've run into about 516/500 words, so I would like help with that too.</p>
<p>If anyone one would like to review mine, and I'll review back, please PM me. I'd really appreciate it</p>