Need Feedback for All UC Essays

Applying to College
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<p>Hey! I finally finished all my UC Essays and would like some feedback on them. I would really appreciate it if anyone can help. Thanks!</p>

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<p>i could take a look</p>

3

<p>ill read them</p>

4

<p>i'll read them too</p>

5

<p>ill read it, pm me</p>

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<p>ill read too!</p>

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<p>I'm not applying to any of those, so I'll be willing to help out.</p>

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<p>i can help too</p>