<p>The problem at this point is, it's too long. About 1,300 words. Some friends have told me that if its interesting, 1,300 is reasonable. Others have said that 1,300 is plain old irritating to a person whose been reading all day. If you think you can help or advise, I would really appreciate it. </p>
<p>Also, I appreciate all the help but prefer someone whole been accepted already or is a parent read it. Class 08 and up.</p>