Need guidance with my Common App essay...

<p>I desperately need help with my common application essay. I've written two completely different essays. Is anyone willing to read both essays and tell me if I have anything to work with? Am I answering the questions? Looking for suggestions, opinions, and critiques. Do I need to scrap these essays and start from square one??</p>

<p>Thanks (I can PM the essays to you)</p>

<p>Anyone willing to give my essays a look?</p>

<p>i will, just PM me</p>

<p>I think I’ve narrowed it down to one. Anyone willing to tear it apart?</p>

<p>Bump… I need readers</p>

<p>i can edit it. pm over.</p>