Need Harsh JHU Essay Critiques

<p>I'm trying to get my app. sent in by monday and just finished my essays up tonight. And I'd like to get some unbiased feedback on them. Older CCer's preferably, not that there is anything wrong with young CCer's... I just want a more mature eye to have a look at them.</p>

<p>Ill give it a look ill search for any error or sturcture. Be sure to include question. You can email me or send PM. i wish you well. :) email is <a href="mailto:Abethebutcher@msn.com">Abethebutcher@msn.com</a></p>

<p>mines are not mature...but i'll read it.</p>

<p>/bump Anyone else?</p>

<p>hit me.........</p>

<p>I'm only a senior in HS, but according to my english teacher i'm a good writer :P. PM me if you want another opinion.</p>

<p>hi, pm me, i need help on my essays...im me at gedalas06 if u can, pm is fine.</p>

<p>If you want, send it to me.</p>