<p>The short answers and essays are about why this school or other topics. They are the supplements of Upenn, Columbia, Tufts and Rochester.
As I am an international students, I really need your help to revise my grammar mistakes! And critique on the structure and comments about whether they are solid answers can be even more helpful!
Thank you in advance!</p>
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<p>Now, I am sure the structure and contents are fine. However, anyone would like to point out my grammar mistakes? Thank you!</p>
<p>OK. PM them over.</p>
<p>I’ll critique just on grammar mistakes, PM me.</p>
<p>I’ve ended the college admissions so I can read and critique.</p>
<p>Thank you all! Anyone else?</p>
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<p>i will! PM me!</p>
<p>i finished my college apps luckily, and im glad people helped me proofread on here. so i guess ill return the favor. expect me to be done 2 days after you send it to me at the latest.</p>
<p>Thank you all! And anyone else? I need some quick reply now since I have to put my attention on other essays. Much left to be done and deadline is rapidly approaching!</p>
<p>i’ll read 
I’m done with all mine already</p>
<p>I have finished my Umich prompt#2 today! But it is a draft. Anyone would like to give me your first impression? Thank you!</p>
<p>I will… I’m not applying to any of those schools!</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to!</p>
<p>Thank you and anyone else? I have revised my essays with your precious advice, and look for more!</p>
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<p>Anyone else? I decide to send it today and just need some more advice. Thank you.</p>