Need help asap

<p>Hello everybody,</p>

<p>I just sent in my ED application. So, now I am trying to get to my RD applications and the essays that are required. I am thinking of writing about the folllowing incident that had a great impact on me I just would like some insight on whether or not the topic is interesting:
A few years ago, a woman asked me to help her find some medicine for her daughter, then she came to our house so that we would search for medication together online. As I heard her story, and how she had been struggling for her child' s life, I was really moved and i came to conclusion that giving a hand to someone with such a tragedy is much more important that earning high grades and stuff like that. Afterwards, I have joined a few communtiy clubs trying to do whatever I could to help others in trouble.
what do you guys think, will this story sound compelling, interesting and memorable?????
I know it will mainly depend on how I write the piece, but I am sure the theme matters too a lootttt. So.... besides, does this go under "an event that has ahd a big impact on me"???((((</p>

<p>Thanks a loottttt.......</p>