Need help editing long common app essay!!!

<p>So, I need help editing my common app essay (I think it might be too long) and I'm not sure if its a concise answer to the prompt. Any help would be greatly appreciated (although I would prefer non 09ers). It's due this week so I'm screwed if i don't get it right x/ Thanks!!</p>

<p>i'd like to , if u don't mind I'm a 09er</p>

<p>have i said i'd help you? cause i will if you want me to.</p>

<p>Sure, I'd love to read it... and if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>

<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>

<p>I'll help.</p>