Need help from admitted transfer students...

Transfer Students
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<p>Would any of you admitted transfers to these top schools (Stanford, Cornell, Brown, Dartmouth, UCLA, UC Berkeley,) care to share your personal statements with me? I am just trying to get a general idea of how a sucessful essay reads like...</p>

<p>Thanks in advance or bump in advance! hah.</p>

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<p>The following thread should be helpful:</p>

<p><a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=68138%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/showthread.php?t=68138&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

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<p>Thanks! I think I've read that thread already though...Does anyone else have anymore essays!?!?!</p>

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<p>bump! bump! bump!</p>

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<p>ummm that's the best you're going to get. You have a kid accepted into 4 of those schools you mentioned(C,D,S,B), plus a kid who got into Yale (sub 4% acceptance as transfer).</p>