<p>Would any of you admitted transfers to these top schools (Stanford, Cornell, Brown, Dartmouth, UCLA, UC Berkeley,) care to share your personal statements with me? I am just trying to get a general idea of how a sucessful essay reads like...</p>
<p>ummm that's the best you're going to get. You have a kid accepted into 4 of those schools you mentioned(C,D,S,B), plus a kid who got into Yale (sub 4% acceptance as transfer).</p>