Need help in essay!

<p>how do i show that i’m passionate about an activity in my essay?</p>

<p>list all the accomplishments (which are so very few)?
talk about what i do when i’m doing it?
tell them, in 500 words, how i feel towards doing it?</p>

<p>any idea??</p>

<p>Im honestly really confused..doo u actually have an activity ur passionate about?..just talk about it..really what sets it apart from the other activities?..what didu learn from it..?</p>

<p>3d animations and video production. it's really something i love. not one that i cooked up. been doing this since i was 10.
what really sets it apart? erm....i dunno. i entered one or two competitions, but no awards. i made a 15-minute video clip for my school's grad night; i took 6 months to complete it.
what did i learn from it? seriously i hate this question. what are the examples of things i can learn?</p>

<p>wait..see ur not diggin deeper..what sets it apart doesnt have to be what u won..but how much u love it..why u love it..why u wanna do it soo badley....i mean u been doin it since u were 10..u did learn a lot ..u just dont realize it..i mean motivation..soo much grr..i just cant explain it!.</p>

<p>i learnt new techniques to polish my works. i learnt cross-fading, audio intertwining, motion velocity, texture rendering, ...etc
i love it because it's.....fun?
sigh im not getting anywhere...
i wrote the essay, but even i myself cant really the 'passion' im trying to tell.</p>

<p>3d animation is a cool topic, because it's something that merges a technical and an artistic field. Maybe you can talk about why you are interested in both of those things? How did you get started in it? Sure, it's fun, but to figure out why you really like it, think about why you would like it more than say, drawing or filming a movie.</p>

<p>oh i think i have some idea on what to write. my main problem was that i didnt know how to define 'passionate'. all i could tell was what the works of my time investment. but then you're right, there're many things i learnt and could write about. thanks guys!
i'll post my essay here for some critiques (or is it critics?) once i get it done.</p>

<p>Are you sure you want to post your essay here?</p>

<p>erm...i'll post a request for a critique then. =)</p>

<p>done! any kind-natured ppl who wants to critic this?</p>