<p>To Financial Aid Committee:</p>
<pre><code>My name is . My major is Engineering. 2009-2010
First year of college was very challenging to me yet I was still wasn't ready for the courses that I chose. My goal was to obtain an A.A Degree to transfer to a 4 year institute to obtain a B.A Degree. My educational goal was to be majoring in Engineering.
In Fall 2009 I chose courses I have since realized were too difficult for a first-time student and I became overwhelmed. Having had no prior experience with college-level life, courses, and exams. I was not sure what to expect and learned that my study techniques lacking, resulting in poor grades. I also failed to attend the review sessions, did not seek assistance from my professor or tutoring help, and as a result I failed my courses.
Due to these circumstances I have been rendered ineligible to receive financial aid. Without financial aid I will be unable to continue my education because I cannot afford the cost of supplies, fees, transportation, and personal expenses. Receiving financial aid will allow me more time to study properly. Without it, I will be forced to take time away from my studies in order to work. My academics are my first priority now and I realize I need to devote all of my time to them in order to be successful in the future.
I recently evaluated my plans to improve my academic. I have determined the following points to be the keys to my educational success.
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<li>I will balance the course choices better.</li>
<li>I will manage my time wisely on academics.</li>
<li>I will seek assistance with my coursework when I have difficulties.</li>
<li>I will maintain communication with my professors on a regular basis to ensure success in my courses</li>
<li><p>Complete classes C or better.</p>
<p>I understand the expectation better now and I am doing well in my coursework this semester with currently all passing grades. I have made a huge improvement and I am determined to pass every class this semester. Although I have made great improvements, without financial aid I fear I will find myself struggling to succeed once again. I hope those of the financial aid committee who read this will give me a second chance to help me accomplish my goals and reach success for the rest of my time at college.</p></li>
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<p>Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to explain my financial circumstances. I look forward to hearing about your decision.</p>
<p>Sincerely,</p>
<p>Any correction/improvement needed? thanks</p>